Tuesday, October 02, 2007

a gentle breeze ruffles my hair
bringing me back to reality
a rueful smile adorns my lips
as my eyes reveal the calm within

i allow the memories to drift back
as i travel back in time
to the first day we met
the firm shake and twinkling eye.

we walked matching steps
finishing sentences and
reading each others mind
and forging a bond,forever.

it has been years since the day
we have braved all odds
and conquered our fears,
and we are together still.


Trance-Maniac said...

lovely ode to love....

Ashu said...

think about ur relnship hard if you feel u hv stagnated. u aint need to blink always whenever any tipping point comes.

gather the strength to do something to regalvanise your life.

Pri said...

whoa..enjoy the feeling :)


Terra said...

Congrtulations on completing a year and heres hoping for many more years of togetherness!

Thanks for visiting my blog :)

KAYLEE said...


FireWhisky said...

tat ws amazing... ive said this b4, im saying it agn... i wish i cd wrte poems!!!

Abhishek Khanna said...

thts nice :)

annie said...

How sugar sweet love!!!!

Celestine said...

so sweeeet

The Lover said...

lovely lines...

preetilata said...

wowwww..such a lovely poem.
i m a die-hard fan of poetry. n ur poem is so natural n beautiful.
all d best from my side...do write more n more poems.
tk cr
:) :) :)

phoenix said...


i am i am....


its actually 3 years not 1 :P lol


thank you :)