Saturday, January 17, 2009

UNTIL WE MET..

I don’t remember when I first saw her,
But whatever I saw
Left me awestruck.

I was charmed into the myriad hues she had woven
And soon got enticed
Into a magical bond.

All my efforts to tell her what I felt for her
Met with instant success
And we were talking away our lives.

I owe her a new viewpoint of life
And maybe I’v made her smile
Once in a while.

I never knew it so sweet a bet
I never felt so wonderful
Until we met.
in case you guys miss it... this is a guest post by Anwesa.. :) she has decided to vehemently protest against my writers block and has decided to bail me out by writing this impromptu poem about me... thank you so much Anwesa for the poem.. I'm too touched for words :)

24 comments:

hitch writer said...

May be I've made her smile, once in a while....

Well written, you surely made me smile !!

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And cute poem.

abhishek said...

didn't know you wrote poems too :)...nice one

pisku said...

All my efforts to tell her what I felt for her
Met with instant success
And we were talking away our lives.

love those lines!

MultiMenon said...

Wowiiieee...cute.. :)

Btw,wen did ya gals bcum joint owners of dis space?? :o
I know I got lots to catch up,not now though ll surely do it wen am felling just a bit better.. :(

Take Care.. :)

Nikhil

Rahul said...

I was charmed into the myriad hues she had woven
And soon got enticed
Into a magical bond.


Lovely expression :)

mayz said...

i hope u talkin abt ur mirror here...that ways we get to c u smile :)

ANWESA said...

@phoenix,
see ur frnds reactions.i cant help smiling. :)

yamini_meduri said...

it was just a smile
that i had all the while
when i was reading you
fresh as the morning dew

keep penning dear....!!!

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

beautifully romantic n sweet :)

Trinaa said...

jab we met!!! nice re :))))

Phoenix said...

@everyone

i think yo guys missed the point completely though nikhil came close... :P

it is a guest post bt anwesa and not me.. the poem is written by her on me!!! :D please redirect your comments!!!

Phoenix said...

@anwesa
i cant believe these guys... im so sorry they dint notice the author of the poem!! :)

but nonetheless thank you so very much... i so loved the poem... im almost in tears

*hugs*

ANWESA said...

hey gal,its gud.dont fret.:)in fact all of dem liked it.n it was dedicated 2 u. :) n i guess if u had 2 write,it wud b d same thots.

Ria said...

wow!beautifully written and u deserve it. Btw read my blog to knw wht i hav been upto. :(

Aneesh said...

Cool! nice to get such words from friends..
:)

Meera said...

Yes..its very touching..
And have a good break!

Lena said...

thats something truly beautiful, anwesa :)
and something to be proud of, raka, if one gets those words dedicated to yourself :)

WarmSunshine said...

Awww that wads very sweet :)

Mithe said...

Thats cute anwesha:)
and phoenix sorry for not being able to talk with you! will do so at the earliest:)

Phoenix said...

@everyone...

anwesa is one hot talented chick and she is my bind after all... and im one glad girl to be her bindni :D

ANWESA said...

@hitch writer,
thanx!!!
@crystal,
thanx!!!
@abhishek,
well,yes..i scribble..
@pisku,
thanx!!!
@multimelon,
hmm..dats a long story.:)
@rahul,
thanx!!
@mayz,
no,its me!!
@yamini,
lovely verse...thanx!!
@preetilata,
thnx!!
@trinaa,
thanx dear!!
@ria,
thanx!!
@aneesh,
thanx!!
@meera,
thanx!!
@lena,
thanx!!
@warmsunshine,
thanx!!
@mithe,
thanx!!!!

Harshita said...

Anwesa,

Do I need to tell you how good you are?

I am floored :)

Raka,
Ab tu wapas aa... I miss u.

ANWESA said...

@harshita,
thanx!!