Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Echoes...

When the heart is raped, repeatedly
Not a wound or drop of tear 
Bear witness.

When disillusionment comes about,
All that is left, is a dream
That has died several deaths 

18 comments:

muthu said...

wow.... a dream that has died a several deaths....

those words spat agony right at my face....

hard hitting words phoenix.

i only hope that if these are not what you are really feeling, and if thats so -

get healed. Life has too much of bliss to only memorize the pain.

yamini meduri said...

as of the post nicely written...but dear...wat happen...i know my Phoenix is not gonna scribble anything juss like that...!!!

anything wrong???

ANWESA said...

dead dreams dying again...
nothing can be more killing..
a real heart-wrenching post...

Sumit said...

sometimes the blame lies with the self and not with other for a repeat can be inflicted only on the one who weakens!!
buckle up girl... u r made of stronger material than it seems!! its time you showed it!!

AD said...

my prayers and well wishes.
are always yours :)

ki said...

Ouch. Hope everything's alright Raka. *hug*

The Pink Orchid said...

it was painful.. :(

Dhanya said...

Ouch :(

Do take good care of yourself, Raka!

Pallav said...

nicely pen down..
i hope everythng is fine at ur end..
i m wooried iwth ur last post n ths one also...

cheers :)
Pallav

Arv said...

hope they are just echoes from the wind... take care mate.. cheers...

Arnab Majumdar said...

Wow, talk about something fresh and unseen... very well connected words here. Keep writing, cheers...

Harshita said...

although the post is really gud...

the concern is... are you okay??

Ria said...

hey r u doin fine??why such a painful poem??

WarmSunshine said...

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яノςんム said...

r u okay?? itne sad thought kyon??

comfortably numb said...

dead dreams....form a sepulchre in some corner of the heart:(

Chronicwriter said...

if raping a heart is a crime, then i am a psychopath
chriz

NE~ISM said...

This poem is great! SPEAKS VOLUMES!

Ne