Thursday, March 22, 2012

Make him feel

Dear God
Make him feel the same things as she does
Let him feel the anguish
Of loving someone
Yet know the pain of sharing her

Let him feel torn inside
Each time he imagines
Her smiling at someone
The same way as she used to at him.
Hands touching her, which are not his.

Make him miss her
So much that it hurts
Even when she is right there beside him
Just the way she misses him

Let him wake up each day
Hurting, knowing that,
It may be their last day together.
The same way as she does.
Day in, day out.

Let him drift off to sleep
Knowing that tomorrow
She will lie in the loving arms
Of the one who will truly values her.
Let him cringe in pain.

Let him reminisce
Old times of fun and laughter
And wince in pain
Knowing that those days are now replaced
With someone who loves and cherishes her.

Let the pain
Be a constant reminder of
All those times when she reached out
And he had scorned her.
Let him feel the rejection too.

Let him feel her absence
Realizing her source of joy
Is no longer him
She smiles but at someone
who is not him.

Let him burn
Imagining her nursing
A child, who is not his
Let him seek salvation
But never find it
For he had wronged her.

For all those times he had wronged her,
Let him feel the rejection
And realize how unworthy he was of her love
Every time he saw her happy
In the arms of the man who truly loves her

Let him feel the loss
Let him feel the pain
Let him burn inside
Let him realize the wrongs
he had subjected her to

Let him value her
For all that she was
Knowing that he has lost her forever
Avenge her hurt and pain
And make her whole again!


PULKIT said...

emotions all mixed, there is love.. pain of the wait it has suffered, anger of hopelessness and disappointments, hatred as a repulse of betrayal, the feeling to moving on and yet with a vengeance somehow... because of tears that flowed remembering the promises that were made but somehow never felt the light of fulfillment ...

Nice scribbled, there is heart in it, a heart that has felt it all

Anwesa said...

Let her move her eternal destination.

Trisha.. said...


Let her give a tight kick to his unworthy behind

Leave him to rot in his miserable world

Let her fly free...

apsara said...

The poem itself felt so painful :/ .... so who writes it? the universe? watching him pine for her? and what about her... does she know he hurts? she mustn't... because now she's ahead... she mustn't even bother about what he feels.... while he should hurt and then one day, value the woman who enters his life... the positive side of such pain is that, it may soften him up for someone else... intriguing read :) i was pretty much taken in! Cheers

Ashwini Dodani said...

This is one of the best, though my second read but still sometimes it clicks and this is really something worth a read!